It was just a normal day until i heard a knock on the door "SARAH"I said with excitement i swung open the door and Sarah came in said bye to her Grandad. We took of our shoes and jumped on the trampoline woo hoo I shouted then my Mum said I'll be right back the boys are here and that meant that my brother and his Friend were looking after us when mum got back we scooted to the esplanade and met Ella, Liam and Conner .We put down are scooters and got on the rocktapuss.
the rocktapuss was so fun we were hungry so we opened the chips. one person would push and try to put them in are hands it didn't work so we decide to hold the packet of chips and pass it around while going full speed we dropped quite a few chips then we jumped off and ran to the mini trampolines we had to wait our turn but when we got on we were bouncing high we saw this weird guy who was try to be a ninja we went on a round a bout and tat guy was there he was really weird but we just ignored him.
then it was time to go home so we packed up our stuff and got on our scooters and ride them to my house the got in the car and dropped Sarah home it was a really fun day.
By Lola
the rocktapuss was so fun we were hungry so we opened the chips. one person would push and try to put them in are hands it didn't work so we decide to hold the packet of chips and pass it around while going full speed we dropped quite a few chips then we jumped off and ran to the mini trampolines we had to wait our turn but when we got on we were bouncing high we saw this weird guy who was try to be a ninja we went on a round a bout and tat guy was there he was really weird but we just ignored him.
then it was time to go home so we packed up our stuff and got on our scooters and ride them to my house the got in the car and dropped Sarah home it was a really fun day.
By Lola
love the introduction!
ReplyDeleteI really like it you have used some good detail. But remember to use capital letters at the start of a paragraph
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